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How to Write Resume Bullet Points That Get Read

A bullet point says what you did and what changed because of it. The shape that works, how to find a result when you have no number, and five bullets to delete.

Umair Sajid, founder of Disruptive Templates5 min read
A plain single-column resume page with one section marked in green

The short version

  • A bullet point describes something you did and what changed because of it.
  • Start with a past-tense verb. Never start with “Responsible for”.
  • One idea per bullet, one or two lines. Three lines is a paragraph wearing a dot.
  • If you have no number, say what changed instead. A result does not have to be measurable to be real.

The bullet points under your job titles are where a resume is won or lost. Everything else — the format, the font, the summary — is about getting a reader to them. And most bullets, on most resumes, are copied out of the job description the writer was given on their first day.

That is understandable. Describing your own work is genuinely difficult, because the things you are proudest of feel obvious to you and the things that felt hard often sound small written down. But a list of duties tells a reader what the job was, not what you were like in it — and they already know what the job was, because they are hiring for it.

The shape of a working bullet

Three parts: a verb, an object with enough detail to be specific, and a consequence.

A duty

Responsible for managing supplier relationships and purchase orders.

A duty with a consequence

Renegotiated terms with the eleven largest suppliers, moving 60 per cent of spend to 60-day payment and releasing about £180k of working capital.

A duty

Duties included answering customer emails and phone calls.

A duty with a consequence

Handled around 60 customer contacts a day across phone and email, holding a 94 per cent satisfaction score while the team average was 88.

Notice that nothing was invented. The second version of each is the same job, described by somebody who stopped to think about what actually happened.

Start with a verb, and vary it

The first word carries the bullet. Use the past tense for previous roles and present tense for your current one, consistently.

Choose a verb that says what you really did. Led, built, rewrote, negotiated, reduced, recovered, trained, investigated, consolidated, automated, escalated, mediated, audited, designed, diagnosed. Avoid the vague ones that could cover anything: handled when you mean resolved, helped when you mean trained, worked on when you mean almost anything else.

There is no need to hunt for a thesaurus entry nobody uses. Repeating led twice is better than reaching for spearheaded.

What to do when there is no number

Plenty of good work produces no metric. A safeguarding referral handled properly, a difficult parent meeting, a system migration that nobody noticed because it went well, a colleague who stayed because you trained them. These are not unquantifiable because they are unimportant.

Four ways to show a result without a percentage:

  • Scale. How many, how often, how large. “Across four sites and 48 staff”, “a caseload of 32”, “around 200 tickets a month”.
  • Before and after. “Rebuilt a rota that had been changed by hand every week for two years.”
  • Difficulty. “First point of contact for out-of-hours escalations on a 24/7 service.”
  • Adoption. “The handover template I wrote is now used on all six wards.”

Getting the numbers you do have

Most people have more figures available than they think. Questions that usually produce one:

  • How many of these did you do in a week, a month, a year?
  • How many people, accounts, sites, students, patients, vehicles?
  • What was the budget, the spend, the revenue, the caseload?
  • How long did it take before, and how long after?
  • What was the score, the rating, the pass rate, the error rate?
  • How many people did you train, supervise or onboard?

Approximate is fine, and honest. “Around 40 a week” is a better sentence than a fabricated 43. If you genuinely cannot remember and cannot check, do not guess a figure you might be asked about.

Length, count and order

One or two lines per bullet. If a bullet runs to three lines, it usually contains two ideas; split it or cut the weaker half.

Four to six bullets for your current and previous role, two or three for roles further back, one or none beyond about eight years. Put the strongest bullet first in each job — readers skim the first item and the last, and skip the middle.

End without full stops or with them, but do it the same way every time. Nobody minds which; everybody notices inconsistency.

Five bullets to delete

  1. “Responsible for…” Responsibility is not achievement. Say what you did with it.
  2. “Duties included…” The reader wrote the duties. They want to know how you performed them.
  3. “Excellent communication skills.” Not a bullet. Not evidence. Show it in a sentence about a conversation that went somewhere.
  4. Anything with no subject. “Worked as part of a team to deliver key objectives” could be from any resume ever written.
  5. The bullet that only exists to carry a keyword. Put the keyword in a true sentence instead — see finding keywords in a job description.

Tailoring bullets to an advert

You do not need to rewrite them for each application. You need to reorder them, and swap two or three.

Read the advert, find the two things it clearly cares most about, and make sure the bullets covering those sit at the top of your most recent role. Demote the bullets that are impressive but irrelevant. That is most of the value of tailoring, and it takes about ten minutes. Tailoring a resume to a job description covers the whole routine.

If you would rather start from a draft

The hardest part of this is knowing what a strong bullet for your job sounds like. Every template here ships with bullet points already drafted for one specific job title, at four experience levels — 1, 2, 5 and 10+ years — so you can start from the nearest version and put your own numbers in. See administrative assistant, data analyst or store manager, or browse all 498 job titles.

There is also a free bullet point rewriter that takes a duty and suggests a stronger structure for it, in the browser, with nothing uploaded.

Common questions

How many bullet points should each job have?

Four to six for your current and most recent role, two or three for older ones, and one or none for anything beyond about eight years ago.

Should resume bullet points end with a full stop?

Either is correct. What matters is doing the same thing in every bullet on the page. Mixed punctuation is the only version that looks careless.

Can a bullet point be a full sentence?

Yes, and most good ones are, minus the opening pronoun. What they should not be is a paragraph: one idea, one or two lines.

What if my job genuinely has no measurable results?

Use scale, before-and-after, difficulty or adoption instead. “Rewrote the handover template now used on all six wards” is a result with no percentage in it.

Is it acceptable to estimate numbers?

Yes, if you say so and the estimate is honest. “Around 60 a day” is fine. A precise figure you invented is not, because you will be asked about it.

Start from a file that already does this

Every template is written for one job title, in a single column, with no tables and no text boxes, and the bullet points are already drafted at 1, 2, 5 and 10+ years. Edit it in Word, Google Docs or Pages.

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